Wow! This was powerful! The pacing and music are perfect! I really learned something! I would put the text on powerpoint slides, save them as .jpg and instert them just before each images so they are easier to read. This might be my new favorite photostory!
Great job! you can really tell this took a lot of time. The only thing I saw that needed attention was the text was hard to read but it looks like you already knew that one ;)
Hello, I am a writer and actor currently employed as a childcare worker and living in the Eastern Panhandle of West Virginia. I am a Municipal Liaison for National Novel Writing Month for my region. I'm hoping soon to break into the science fiction market.
good job, the music meshed very well.
ReplyDeleteWow! This was powerful! The pacing and music are perfect! I really learned something! I would put the text on powerpoint slides, save them as .jpg and instert them just before each images so they are easier to read. This might be my new favorite photostory!
ReplyDeleteI'll try that. I know the words were hard to read. Glad you liked it.
ReplyDeletenice,your photo story is very informational, the only problem was trying to read some of the texts. but it seems you already have a solution to that.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing i would correct is the contrast between the text and the photos. Good job. The music flowed with the pics.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! you can really tell this took a lot of time. The only thing I saw that needed attention was the text was hard to read but it looks like you already knew that one ;)
ReplyDeleteWow, that was great! It had a really artsy feel to it. Loved it.
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